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How to Overcome Writer's Block in the Middle of Your Novel (Not Just 'Keep Writing')

Diagnose and fix what's actually wrong with your stuck manuscript

By Chandler Supple15 min read
Diagnose My Block

River's AI helps you diagnose why you're stuck in the middle, identify structural vs. motivational problems, generate solutions specific to your situation, and create an action plan to finish your manuscript.

You were on fire for the first 30,000 words. Characters came alive. Scenes flowed. Plot clicked into place. You'd write 2,000 words in a sitting and it felt effortless. This was finally the book you'd finish. The one that would work. Your beginning is strong—maybe the best thing you've ever written.

Then you hit 35,000 words and... nothing. You open the document and stare. You know vaguely what should happen next but can't write it. You try—write a scene, hate it, delete it. Try again. Worse. You avoid the manuscript for days. Then weeks. Then months. The file sits there, stuck at 37,452 words, mocking you every time you see it. Another abandoned manuscript. Another book that died in the middle.

Sound familiar? You're not alone. Most abandoned manuscripts die between 30K-60K words—not at the exciting beginning, not near the visible finish line, but in the dreaded middle. And generic advice like "just write through it" or "push through the resistance" doesn't help when you genuinely don't know what happens next or why you lost all passion for the project.

Here's what successful authors know: Middle-book block isn't one problem—it's several different problems that look the same from outside. Structural breakdown looks like passion loss looks like fear-based paralysis, but each needs different solution. This guide will teach you how to diagnose your specific type of block and fix what's actually broken so you can finish your stuck manuscript.

Why the Middle Is Where Books Die

The Statistics Nobody Talks About

Most abandoned manuscripts die between 30K-60K words. The middle is where momentum evaporates, doubts multiply, and writers quietly quit.

This is completely normal. You're not uniquely broken or untalented. Every author—including published, successful ones—faces this challenge. The difference: They learned to diagnose and fix it instead of abandoning and starting fresh.

Why Middles Are Structurally Hardest

Novelty wore off: Beginning feels like new relationship—exciting, fresh, endless possibility. Middle is routine. You know these characters too well. World no longer surprises you. You're bored with your own story.

Structure is inherently harder: Beginnings = setup (relatively straightforward). Endings = payoff (exciting to write). Middles = complications and escalation (hard to sustain). Must raise stakes without resolving them. Keep interesting without payoff yet. It's writing in tension without release—difficult to maintain.

Doubt thrives in the middle: Beginning: "This is brilliant!" Middle: "This is terrible. Nobody will want to read this. I should start something else." You're far enough in to see flaws clearly, not far enough to see it working yet. Stuck in messy middle zone where everything looks broken.

No clear next step: Beginning: You knew what to write. End: You know where it's going. Middle: "What happens between here and there?" Vague sense of direction but no specific next scene. Paralysis sets in.

Original plan isn't working: If you outlined: Reality of writing revealed weaknesses in your outline. Characters won't do what outline says. Plot doesn't work as planned. Stuck between "follow outline" and "follow intuition." If you didn't outline: Discovery writing hit a dead end. No idea what happens next. Accidentally wrote yourself into a corner.

The Good News

Middle-book block is diagnostic. It's your story telling you something's wrong. Fixable if you correctly diagnose the problem.

Stuck in the middle of your manuscript?

River's AI helps you diagnose why you're blocked, identify structural vs. motivational problems, generate solutions specific to your situation, and create an action plan to finish your manuscript.

Diagnose My Block

Diagnostic Framework: Five Types of Blocks

Type 1: Structural Problem

Symptoms: You WANT to write but can't figure out what happens next. Multiple attempts feel wrong. Story feels aimless. Characters doing things but nothing matters. Subplot took over. Lost track of main conflict.

What's wrong: The STORY has a problem, not you. Structure broke down. Plot lost direction. Stakes unclear. Conflict resolved too soon or not escalating properly.

Solution category: Structural fixes (outline repair, stakes escalation, conflict raising)

Type 2: Wrong Direction

Symptoms: Outline says X but feels wrong to write. Characters won't cooperate. Forcing scenes that feel flat. Avoiding specific plot point. Gut says "this isn't right" but you're ignoring it.

What's wrong: Story WANTS to go different direction than planned. You're fighting it. Original plan doesn't fit what story organically became during writing.

Solution category: Course correction (revise outline, follow intuition, give characters what they want)

Type 3: Passion Loss

Symptoms: Structurally story works but you don't care anymore. Bored writing it. Would rather write literally anything else. Can't remember why this excited you. Procrastinating but not stuck on what happens—just don't want to write it.

What's wrong: Emotional connection to project severed. Burnout, boredom, or possibly wrong project entirely.

Solution category: Rekindle excitement or give permission to trunk it

Type 4: External Interference

Symptoms: Used to write consistently, now can't. Life circumstances changed significantly. Depression, anxiety, or grief interfering. Overwhelmed by other responsibilities. Physical or mental health issues.

What's wrong: Not about manuscript. About life conditions preventing creativity and focus.

Solution category: Address external factors, adjust expectations, seek support

Type 5: Fear and Perfectionism

Symptoms: Write scenes then immediately delete them. Nothing feels good enough. Avoiding "important" scenes. Worried about "doing it right." Comparing your draft to published books. Rewriting opening instead of moving forward.

What's wrong: Fear of inadequacy paralyzing progress. Perfectionism preventing completion.

Solution category: Lower standards, permission to write badly, separate drafting from revising

Most Common Types

Type 1 (Structural) and Type 2 (Wrong Direction) are most common for middle-book blocks. Good news: Both are fixable with specific, actionable steps.

Solutions for Structural Problems

Solution 1: Identify Your Destination

The problem: Wandering aimlessly because you don't know where you're going.

The fix: Answer this question specifically: What is the climax of this book?

Not vague ("They defeat the villain"). Specific ("Emma confronts her father in the burning courthouse and chooses to save the evidence instead of him").

Once you know your destination, working backward becomes easier. What must happen FOR that climax to work? What setup does it require? That's your middle.

Solution 2: Escalate the Stakes

The problem: Stakes plateaued or never felt high enough.

The fix: Make things WORSE. What's your protagonist's worst fear? Make it happen. What safety net are they relying on? Remove it. What comfortable position do they have? Destroy it.

Formula: Every time you think "things can't get worse," make them worse.

Example: Stuck at hero searching for magical artifact. Escalation: Hero finds artifact but villain captured their mentor. Now the stakes: Get artifact to safety OR save mentor. Can't do both. Must choose.

Solution 3: Add a Reversal

The problem: Story feels predictable, even to you.

The fix: Something believed to be true is actually false. Ally is secretly enemy. The McGuffin is the wrong McGuffin. The goal isn't what protagonist actually needs.

Reversals create instant momentum. Force new direction. Surprise YOU first—if it surprises you, it'll surprise readers.

Solution 4: Check Your Subplots

The problem: Subplot took over main plot, or subplots disappeared entirely.

The fix: List your plots: Main plot (external goal), character arc (internal journey), romantic subplot (if applicable), other subplots. Are all present in the last 10,000 words you wrote?

If one's missing: That's why story feels thin. If one dominates: That's why it feels unfocused. Balance them. Weave between them. Each should complicate the others.

Solution 5: Skip This Specific Scene

The problem: Stuck on one particular scene.

The fix: Write [SCENE WHERE X HAPPENS] and move on. Come back later. Maybe that scene isn't necessary. Maybe it'll be obvious once you write what comes after.

Don't let one scene stop the entire book. Your first draft doesn't need to be written in order.

Solutions for Wrong Direction

Solution 1: Listen to Your Resistance

The problem: Outline says X should happen but it feels wrong to write.

The fix: Your resistance is data. Why does X feel wrong? Ask yourself: Is this scene out of character? Does this plot point feel contrived? Is this actually the story I want to tell?

Often what happened: Story evolved beyond your outline. Characters became different people than you planned. Original plan no longer fits the living story.

Permission granted: Deviate from outline. Follow what feels alive.

Solution 2: Interview Your Characters

The problem: Characters refusing to do what you need them to do.

The fix: Literally interview them. Write a conversation:

You: "Why won't you do X?"
Character: [What would they actually say?]
You: "What do you want instead?"
Character: [What do they want?]
You: "What are you afraid of?"
Character: [Their actual fear?]

This often reveals: Character motivation changed as you wrote them, you don't understand them deeply enough yet, they want different arc than you planned.

Follow what you discover. Let them guide you.

Solution 3: Try the Opposite

The problem: Plan says A, feels wrong, but no alternative occurs to you.

The fix: Write the OPPOSITE of your plan.

Plan: Hero accepts the mission → Try: Hero refuses the mission
Plan: Couple gets together → Try: Couple breaks up
Plan: Protagonist tells the truth → Try: Protagonist lies

Sometimes the opposite is what your story actually needs. Even if you don't use it, exploring opposite often reveals what should actually happen.

Solution 4: Return to Original Excitement

The problem: Lost sense of what this story even is.

The fix: Reread your original notes, brainstorming documents, the query letter draft you wrote early on, the pitch you'd give a friend.

What was the CORE of this story that excited you? Have you buried that core under complexity? How do you return to it?

Often what happened: You added so much complexity that the essential core got buried. Simplify back to essence.

Solutions for Passion Loss

Solution 1: Write the Fun Scene

The problem: Slogging through boring connective tissue scenes.

The fix: Skip ahead to the scene you're actually excited about. The action scene. The kiss. The confrontation. The twist reveal.

Write what excites you right now. Connective tissue can come later. Excitement is fuel. Use it when you have it.

Solution 2: Add Something You Love

The problem: Story feels like obligation, not joy.

The fix: What do YOU personally love? Heist sequences? Add a heist. Witty banter? Introduce a bantering character. Animals? Give protagonist a dog.

This is YOUR book. You're allowed to include things you love even if they're "not strictly necessary." Your enjoyment matters. You write better when you're engaged.

Solution 3: Take Strategic Break

The problem: Burned out on this project.

The fix: One week completely away. No writing on this project. No thinking about it. Read in a different genre. Watch movies. Refill the creative well.

Return after one week. If you're excited to get back to it: Continue. If you feel dread: Bigger problem (possibly wrong project entirely).

Solution 4: Permission to Trunk

The hard truth: Not every project should be finished. Some books are practice. Some ideas don't work. Some timing is wrong.

Permission granted: Set it aside (not delete—set aside). Start a different project. Return later if and when passion returns.

Don't force yourself to finish something making you genuinely miserable. Life is short. Write what brings you alive.

BUT: Balance this with: Finishing teaches completion skills. Trunking teaches avoidance. Finish MOST things, trunk SOME. Writer who finishes nothing = hobbyist. Writer who forces through everything = burnout. Middle path.

Solutions for Fear and Perfectionism

Solution 1: Lower Your Standards Dramatically

The problem: Nothing feels good enough to keep.

The fix: Your goal is NOT a perfect draft. Your goal is a FINISHED draft. First drafts are supposed to be terrible. That's what revision is for.

Mantra: "I can fix bad. I can't fix blank."

Write the imperfect version. Move forward. Revise later when you can see the whole shape of the story.

Solution 2: Write Through, Mark for Revision

The problem: Keep rewriting the same section over and over.

The fix: Write [THIS NEEDS WORK] in brackets and continue forward. Don't revise now. Don't rewrite. Get to the end of your draft first.

Revision happens AFTER the draft is complete. Not during. Separating these phases prevents endless loop of rewriting chapter one.

Solution 3: Set Lower Word Count Goals

The problem: Overwhelmed by how much is left to write.

The fix: Not "finish this chapter." Not "write 2,000 words." Instead: "Write 200 words. Badly if necessary."

Small goals. Achievable. Build momentum through small victories. 200 words often becomes 500 once you start. But 200 is achievable even on hard days.

Tactical Exercises to Get Unstuck

Exercise 1: The Midpoint Check

If stuck around 40-50% mark, check: Do you have a strong midpoint?

Midpoint should be: Major reversal or revelation, point of no return, stakes significantly raised, protagonist shifts from reactive to active.

Don't have this? That's likely why you're stuck. Add a midpoint reversal. Changes everything going forward.

Exercise 2: The Summary Method

Write a bullet-point summary of everything that happens from where you are now to the end.

Example:
- Emma discovers truth about father's crimes
- Confronts sister who knew all along
- Finds hidden evidence in old family house
- Father threatens family to keep quiet
- Emma chooses justice over safety
- Final confrontation in courthouse

Now you have roadmap. Fill in actual scenes between beats.

Exercise 3: The Five Chapter Sprint

Commit to writing five chapters. Even if terrible. Even if you delete them later. Even if you change direction after.

Just push through five chapters. Often this breaks through the block. Momentum returns. Story reveals what it wants to be.

Exercise 4: The Dialogue Fast-Forward

Stuck on how to get from A to B? Write ONLY dialogue. Characters talking through the situation. No description. No action beats. Just conversation.

This often reveals: What characters actually want, natural next step, necessary exposition. Then add action and description later once you know what actually happens.

Your Action Plan to Get Unstuck

Week 1: Diagnosis - [ ] Identify which type of block you have (structural, wrong direction, passion loss, fear) - [ ] Be honest about symptoms - [ ] Choose solutions from appropriate category Week 2: Structural Fixes (If Applicable) - [ ] Write specific climax scene description - [ ] List your stakes—are they escalating? - [ ] Check subplot balance in last 10K words - [ ] Plan next 5 major plot beats - [ ] Add midpoint reversal if missing Week 2: Direction Fixes (If Applicable) - [ ] Interview your resistant character - [ ] Try opposite of what you planned - [ ] Review original pitch and excitement - [ ] Give yourself permission to deviate from outline Week 2: Passion Fixes (If Applicable) - [ ] Skip to fun scene you're excited about - [ ] Add one element you personally love - [ ] Take strategic 5-day break - [ ] Reconnect with why this story mattered Weeks 3-6: Implementation - [ ] Set achievable daily word count (200-500 words) - [ ] Write badly without revising - [ ] Skip resistant scenes, use [PLACEHOLDER] - [ ] Track progress—are you moving forward? Decision Point (6 Weeks): - Made progress? Keep going, you're unstuck. - Still stuck? Try different diagnosis/solution. - Genuinely miserable? Permission to trunk and start fresh.

Final Thoughts: The Middle Is Survivable

Every finished book had a middle. Every published author has been where you are—stuck, doubting, wondering if this manuscript is the one they finally can't finish. The difference between published authors and aspiring authors often isn't talent. It's learning to diagnose and fix middle-book blocks instead of abandoning and starting fresh each time.

Your block is telling you something. Listen to it. Is it saying the structure broke? Fix the structure. Is it saying you're going the wrong direction? Change direction. Is it saying you're afraid of writing badly? Lower your standards. Is it saying this is the wrong project? Maybe it is—and that's okay too.

But don't just "push through" without diagnosis. That's like treating every illness with aspirin. Sometimes it works. Often it doesn't. Specific problems need specific solutions. Structural breakdown and passion loss look similar from outside but need completely different fixes.

Finishing is a skill. It gets easier each time. Your first finished manuscript is hardest. Your fifth is still hard but manageable. Your tenth, you know how to push through the middle. Not because it stops being difficult—but because you've learned to diagnose and fix what's broken instead of abandoning ship.

So diagnose your block. Apply the appropriate solution. Give it six weeks of honest effort. If you break through—which most writers do with right diagnosis—you'll have learned the most valuable skill: how to finish despite the middle. That skill will serve you for every book you write after this one. And if after six weeks of right solutions you're still genuinely miserable, you have permission to trunk it without guilt. Not every project must be finished. But most should be. Balance persistence with wisdom.

Your stuck manuscript isn't dead. It's just in the middle. And middles are survivable. You can do this.

Frequently Asked Questions

How do I know if I should push through or trunk the manuscript? What's the difference between normal middle-book resistance and 'this is the wrong project'?

PUSH THROUGH if: (1) You can identify specific structural problem (fixable), (2) You remember why you loved it and want to recapture that, (3) You've finished books before and recognize this as normal middle slump, (4) Story still has potential, you're just stuck on execution, (5) Fixing it feels hard but doable. TRUNK if: (1) You dread even thinking about it for months, (2) No structural fix makes you feel excited, (3) You started for wrong reasons (trend-chasing, etc.), (4) You're genuinely miserable, not just stuck, (5) A different project calls to you with real passion. TEST: Take one week completely away. Return. If curious about story and characters: Push through. If pure dread: Consider trunking. But: Finish MOST projects. Trunk rarely. Trunking becomes habit if you do it every time middle gets hard.

I've been stuck for six months. Is it too late to save this manuscript or should I just start over?

NOT too late. Six months away gives perspective. FIRST: Reread what you have. Often better than you remember. Distance helps. THEN: Diagnose using framework in this guide. Six-month gaps usually mean: (1) Structural problem you couldn't solve then (but might see solution now), (2) Passion loss (might return with distance), or (3) Life circumstances prevented writing (might be different now). STRATEGY: Commit to two weeks of focused diagnosis and fixes. If breakthrough happens: Continue. If still completely stuck after honest two-week effort: Either start over with new outline incorporating what you learned, OR trunk and start different project. Don't abandon without diagnosis. Same problems will recur in next book if you don't learn to fix them. Time invested isn't wasted—it's practice—but you don't owe the manuscript endless suffering.

What if I've diagnosed the problem but the fix requires rewriting significant portions I've already written? Should I go back or keep moving forward?

KEEP MOVING FORWARD. Finish the draft with the new direction, even if it doesn't match what came before. Mark discrepancies: [NOTE: This contradicts earlier scene, will fix in revision]. Why: (1) You need to see whole story before knowing what actually needs rewriting, (2) Revising now = risk of never finishing draft, (3) Many 'major' rewrites turn out to be minor tweaks once you see complete draft, (4) Finishing draft = psychological win that motivates revision. EXCEPTION: If first 20% is so fundamentally wrong that continuing is impossible (wrong protagonist, wrong genre, wrong premise), THEN revise before continuing. But most structural fixes can be noted and addressed in revision after draft complete. First priority: Finish draft. Even imperfect, mismatched draft. Second priority: Fix it in revision. This order prevents endless loop of rewriting beginning without finishing.

I have multiple manuscripts stuck in the middle. Should I focus on finishing one or is this a sign of a deeper problem?

This IS deeper problem: You haven't learned to finish. Each time middle gets hard, you start fresh project (which feels easier because beginnings are easy). But you're practicing STARTING, not FINISHING. Finishing is different skill. SOLUTION: Pick ONE manuscript. The one with most potential or that you loved most. Commit: You will finish this one even if imperfect. Use every strategy in this guide. DO NOT start new project until this one is drafted completely. Yes, it will be harder than starting fresh. That's the point. You're learning to finish. Once you finish ONE, the skill transfers. Second book easier to finish. Third easier still. But if you never finish one, you'll always be starter who has 10 books at 40K words. Choose. Commit. Finish. THEN start next with knowledge that you CAN finish. Multiple stuck manuscripts = practicing wrong skill. Pick one. Learn to finish.

My outline says one thing but my characters keep resisting. Should I force them to follow the outline or let them take over?

LET THEM LEAD (usually). Character resistance is your subconscious telling you the outline doesn't fit what the story organically became. When you force characters to do things that don't fit who they are, scenes feel flat, unnatural, contrived. Readers feel this too. HOWEVER: Check if character resistance is serving story or derailing it. GOOD resistance: Character's authentic personality/motivation conflicts with outline's requirements. They've become real and won't behave artificially. Follow this. BAD resistance: Character is taking easy path to avoid conflict. Being passive when story needs them active. This isn't authentic resistance—it's you avoiding difficult scenes. Don't follow this. HOW TO TELL: Ask: Is character resisting because it's out of character, or because *I* don't want to write the hard scene? First = follow them. Second = make them do it anyway. Trust authentic character development. Don't trust avoidance.

I keep rewriting my opening chapters instead of moving forward into the middle. How do I stop this cycle?

This is fear disguised as perfectionism. You're avoiding the hard work of middle by endlessly polishing what's already written. HARD TRUTH: Your opening isn't as broken as you think. It's procrastination. SOLUTION: (1) Save current opening as 'Draft 1 Opening - DO NOT EDIT,' (2) Close that file, (3) Open working draft starting at where you stopped moving forward, (4) Make rule: Cannot touch opening until draft is completely finished, (5) Write [OPENING NEEDS: X] in notes file, then forget it and write forward. Your opening will need revision anyway after you finish draft (they always do—because ending changes what opening needs to set up). Revising it now wastes time. Opening's job is to get you INTO story. It's done that job. Now write the middle and end. THEN revise opening to fit complete story. Not before. If you can't stop yourself: Delete opening chapters from working document. Save elsewhere. Remove temptation.

Chandler Supple

Co-Founder & CTO at River

Chandler spent years building machine learning systems before realizing the tools he wanted as a writer didn't exist. He founded River to close that gap. In his free time, Chandler loves to read American literature, including Steinbeck and Faulkner.

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