Your company has 30 employees and you're bidding against multinational corporations with 10,000 employees. The RFP is 150 pages of requirements, evaluation criteria, and compliance matrices. You have two weeks to respond. And this is a $5M contract that could transform your business—or financially devastate you if you win and can't deliver.
RFP responses are high-stakes documents where precision, compliance, and persuasion must align perfectly. Miss one requirement buried on page 87? Disqualified. Fail to convince evaluators you can deliver? Lose to the incumbent. Price too high? Eliminated on cost. Price too low? They question if you understand the scope.
This guide breaks down how to respond to RFPs strategically—the compliance frameworks, win themes development, ghosting techniques, and proposal structures that allow smaller companies to beat larger, more established competitors.
Why Most RFP Responses Fail
RFPs have brutally high failure rates. In federal government contracting, it's common for 80% of proposals to be immediately eliminated for non-compliance before evaluators even read the content. Of those that pass initial review, most lose because they fail to differentiate or convince evaluators they're the best choice.
Common Failure Modes
Non-compliance: Missing a required certification, exceeding page limits, using wrong font size, or not addressing a requirement. Evaluation teams have checklists. If you miss anything, you're out—regardless of how good your technical solution is.
Generic, boilerplate responses: Proposals that could apply to any RFP, with no customization to this specific client's needs. Evaluators can tell when you're copying from previous proposals.
Failure to demonstrate understanding: Just repeating back requirements without showing you understand the underlying problem or challenge.
No clear differentiation: Evaluators can't tell why you're better than competitors. You listed capabilities but didn't explain your competitive advantages.
Weak past performance: No relevant similar projects, or projects described vaguely without measurable results.
Unrealistic pricing: Either so high you're eliminated on cost, or so low evaluators don't believe you understand the scope or can deliver quality.
Poor writing and presentation: Dense paragraphs, unclear structure, typos, unprofessional appearance. Evaluators are drowning in proposals—if yours is hard to read, you lose.
The Compliance Matrix: Your Foundation
Before writing a single word of narrative, create your compliance matrix. This is a table mapping every RFP requirement to where you address it in your response.
Why This Matters
Evaluators use compliance matrices to verify you addressed everything. Many government RFPs explicitly require compliance matrices. Even when not required, creating one ensures you don't miss requirements.
How to Build It
Read the RFP completely. Extract every "shall," "must," "will," and "should" statement—these are requirements. Number them or use RFP's existing numbering. Create a table:
| Requirement # | Requirement Text | Compliant? | Response Location |
|---------------|-----------------|-----------|------------------|
| 1.2.1 | Contractor shall provide 24/7 support | Yes | Section 4.2, page 23 |
| 1.2.2 | System must support 1000 users | Yes | Section 3.1, page 15 |
If you can't meet a requirement, note "Partial" or "Alternative Approach" and explain why your alternative is equivalent or better. Don't hide non-compliance—evaluators will find it and it looks dishonest.
The Shell Document
Before writing, create a shell document with all required sections, subsections, page limits, and formatting. This prevents you from writing 30 pages for a 20-page section and having to brutally cut later.
Your shell should include:
- Required sections in required order
- Page allocations per section based on evaluation weighting
- Win themes to integrate into each section
- Placeholder text reminding what goes where
This becomes your writing roadmap and ensures compliance.
Developing Your Win Strategy and Themes
Before writing, answer: Why should you win? What are your 3-5 key messages that differentiate you from competitors?
Win Theme Development Process
1. Analyze evaluation criteria and hot buttons
If the RFP says "technical approach (40%), past performance (30%), management (15%), price (15%)," technical approach matters most. Your win themes should emphasize technical strengths.
Look for "hot buttons"—concerns expressed in RFP or client conversations. If they mention "previous contractor's poor communication," responsive communication becomes a win theme.
2. Assess your competitive position
Are you incumbent (defending) or challenger (attacking)? Incumbents emphasize continuity and proven performance. Challengers emphasize innovation and fresh perspective.
Who are likely competitors? What are their strengths and weaknesses? Your win themes should highlight areas where you're strong and they're weak.
3. Identify your discriminators
What can you do that competitors can't or won't? Examples:
- Specialized expertise or certifications
- Proprietary tools or methodologies
- Geographic presence (local vs. remote)
- Socioeconomic status (small business, veteran-owned, woman-owned)
- Past performance with this specific client
- Faster delivery timelines
- Lower total cost of ownership
4. Craft 3-5 win themes
Each theme should be:
- Clear and memorable (one sentence)
- Differentiating (not generic)
- Important to client (addresses evaluation criteria)
- Supportable with evidence
Example win themes for IT modernization project:
Theme 1: Zero-Downtime Migration Expertise
"Our proven phased migration methodology has successfully transitioned 23 agencies to cloud with zero downtime—critical given your 24/7 operational requirements."
Theme 2: Federal Security Compliance
"Unlike commercial-focused competitors, our team includes certified FedRAMP and FISMA experts with active security clearances who understand federal compliance requirements."
Theme 3: Local Committed Team
"We're based 15 miles from your facility with dedicated on-site staff—not fly-in consultants—ensuring responsive support and deep partnership."
Notice: Each theme is specific (not "we're experienced"), differentiating (implies competitors lack this), and evidence-based (numbers, certifications, location).
Integrating Themes Throughout
Win themes must appear in every section:
- Executive summary: State themes explicitly
- Technical approach: Show how your approach delivers on themes
- Past performance: Provide evidence supporting themes
- Management plan: Demonstrate how you'll execute themes
Repetition isn't bad—it's strategic reinforcement. Evaluators should finish reading thinking "These are the zero-downtime experts with federal compliance experience and local presence."
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Start RFP ResponseThe Executive Summary: Your Most Important Pages
The executive summary is often the only section all evaluators read completely. Decision-makers may only read this section. It must be compelling, complete, and concise.
What Belongs in It
Opening hook (1-2 paragraphs): Address their most pressing need or pain point. Show you understand what keeps them up at night.
"The Department faces an immediate challenge: modernize 30-year-old infrastructure while maintaining 24/7 operations serving 50,000 users. Downtime isn't an option—yet typical migrations cause average 72 hours of service disruption. Our proposal eliminates this risk through proven phased methodology that has achieved zero downtime in 23 similar migrations."
Win themes (3-5 bullet points or short paragraphs): Your key messages clearly stated.
Understanding of requirements: Demonstrate you get it—not just repeating requirements but showing you understand the underlying challenges.
Your approach (high-level): In non-technical language, explain what you'll do and why it works.
Why you (qualifications summary): Briefly highlight your relevant experience, unique capabilities, and commitment.
Closing commitment: Clear statement that you'll deliver on promises.
What Doesn't Belong
Don't waste executive summary space on:
- Company history ("Founded in 1995..." doesn't help)
- Generic capabilities ("We provide IT services")
- Detailed technical specs (save for technical section)
- Pricing details (save for cost section)
Every sentence should answer: Why should we choose you?
Writing the Technical Approach
This is usually the highest-weighted evaluation criterion. Your technical approach must be clear, feasible, and address all requirements while showcasing your methodology.
Structure
Overview: High-level explanation of your approach (2-3 paragraphs for non-technical audience)
Detailed methodology: Break into phases, tasks, or work streams. For each:
- Objective (what this phase accomplishes)
- Activities (specific tasks)
- Deliverables (concrete outputs)
- Timeline (duration)
- Success criteria (how you know it's done right)
Tools and technologies: Specific systems, software, frameworks you'll use
Quality assurance: How you ensure high-quality work
Innovation: What cutting-edge or best practices you bring
Risk management: Identify risks and explain mitigation
Common Mistakes
Too vague: "We'll use agile methodology." Great, but what specifically? What sprints? What ceremonies? How do you adapt agile to this context?
Too technical: Dense jargon that evaluators (who may not be technical experts) can't understand. Use clear language with technical details in appendices if needed.
Not addressing risks: Every project has risks. If you pretend there aren't any, evaluators think you're naive. Identify realistic risks and show mitigation plans.
Not differentiating: Your approach sounds like everyone else's. Highlight what's unique about your methodology or tools.
Use Graphics
Process flow diagrams, timelines, Gantt charts, and organization charts communicate complex information quickly. They also break up text and make proposals more scannable.
Every graphic should have a clear purpose and be referenced in text. Don't add decoration—add clarification.
Ghosting Competitors: Subtle Differentiation
Ghosting is raising factors that favor you without explicitly naming or attacking competitors. Done well, it plants doubt about others while appearing to just explain your approach.
How to Ghost
Your strength (local presence):
"Response time matters when critical systems fail. Our local team—based 20 miles from your facility—commits to 2-hour on-site response. Some vendors rely on remote support or fly-in resources, which delays resolution and increases downtime risk during emergencies. We believe local presence drives better outcomes."
What this does: Makes evaluators wonder if other bidders are local. Even if competitors say they'll be responsive, you've planted doubt.
Your strength (specialized experience):
"Healthcare IT requires specialized knowledge of HIPAA compliance, HL7 standards, and clinical workflows—not just general IT expertise. Our team includes certified healthcare IT professionals and has implemented 15 EHR systems. This specialization prevents costly mistakes common when generalists attempt healthcare projects."
What this does: If competitor is an IT generalist without healthcare specialization, you've called them out without naming them.
Ghost Strategically
Ghost on factors where:
- You're strong and competitors are weak
- The factor matters to evaluation criteria
- You can substantiate the importance (data, examples, risk scenarios)
Don't ghost on everything or it looks defensive. Choose 2-3 key differentiators to emphasize subtly throughout.
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Build Differentiation StrategyPast Performance: Proving You Can Deliver
Past performance is often 20-30% of evaluation criteria. It's your evidence that claims in technical approach aren't just promises—you've actually done this before.
Selecting Projects to Include
Include projects that are:
- Similar in scope: Same type of work, similar dollar value, comparable complexity
- Recent: Within last 3-5 years (more recent is better)
- Successful: On-time, on-budget, satisfied client
- Referenceable: Client will speak positively if contacted
Don't just list all your work. Carefully select projects that mirror this opportunity.
Describing Projects
For each project, include:
Project name and client: Be specific enough to verify but respect confidentiality if needed
Period of performance: Start and end dates
Contract value: Shows you can manage projects of this size
Description: 2-3 sentences explaining what you did
Relevance: Explicitly state how this project is similar to current RFP
"This project is directly relevant because it involved migrating 200,000 users to cloud infrastructure under strict security requirements—the same challenge facing this procurement."
Results achieved: Specific, measurable outcomes:
- Delivered 2 weeks early
- Came in 5% under budget
- Achieved 99.95% uptime (exceeding 99.9% SLA)
- Reduced client's operational costs by 30%
- Zero security incidents during or after migration
Client reference: Name, title, phone, email (if required by RFP)
When You Lack Perfect Past Performance
If you don't have identical past performance:
Analogize: "While we haven't migrated this exact system, we've migrated 10 similar enterprise platforms, demonstrating transferable expertise."
Highlight components: "This project requires database migration, user training, and security compliance. We've successfully delivered all three components in separate projects."
Bring in teammates: If you're teaming with more experienced partners, emphasize their past performance.
Be honest: Don't fabricate experience. Evaluators verify claims, and dishonesty is grounds for disbarment.
Pricing Strategy: Best Value, Not Lowest Cost
Pricing is often the most misunderstood aspect of RFP responses. The goal usually isn't to be cheapest—it's to provide best value.
Understanding Evaluation Methods
Lowest Price Technically Acceptable (LPTA): If you meet technical requirements, lowest price wins. Price to win while meeting all requirements.
Best Value Trade-Off: Evaluators balance technical merit and price. You can be higher priced if your technical solution justifies the cost.
Fixed-Price vs. Cost-Plus: Fixed price means you eat cost overruns. Be conservative. Cost-plus means client pays actual costs (plus fee). Justify why your hours/costs are reasonable.
Pricing to Win
Research market rates: What have similar contracts been awarded at? Use resources like USAspending.gov for government contracts, or industry surveys for commercial.
Understand your costs: Labor, materials, overhead, fee/profit. Don't underbid and lose money.
Justify your pricing: If higher than competitors might be, explain why:
- Higher expertise/qualifications of staff
- Better tools/technology
- Lower risk approach
- Faster delivery
- Better quality/outcomes
Show Total Cost of Ownership (TCO): Your upfront price may be higher, but lower long-term costs (maintenance, operations, scalability) make you cheaper over contract life.
Price Volume Structure
Follow RFP format exactly. Typically includes:
- Summary pricing table
- Detailed labor breakdown (positions, rates, hours)
- ODCs (Other Direct Costs): travel, materials, licenses
- Indirect rates (overhead, G&A, profit)
- Cost narrative explaining rates and assumptions
Be transparent. Evaluators appreciate honesty more than suspiciously low bids they don't believe.
Proposal Writing and Review Process
Writing Tips
Active voice: "We will migrate 200 servers" not "200 servers will be migrated"
Specific, not vague: "Deliver weekly status reports every Monday by 10am" not "Provide regular updates"
Scannable: Use headers, bullet points, tables, bold text. Evaluators skim first.
Evidence-based: Every claim supported by data, past performance, or logical reasoning
Client-focused: Every paragraph relates to their needs, not just your capabilities
Review Process
Color Team Reviews:
Pink Team (50% complete): Review strategy, outline, win themes. Is the plan sound?
Red Team (90% complete): Full content review. Does it answer all requirements? Is it compelling? Use fresh eyes—people who haven't been writing.
Gold Team (Final): Compliance check. Every requirement addressed? All forms completed? Formatting correct?
Pre-Submission Checklist
□ Every requirement from compliance matrix addressed
□ All required forms and certifications included
□ Page limits met (not exceeded)
□ Formatting matches RFP specs (font, margins, etc.)
□ All tables/graphics have captions and are referenced
□ Pricing matches between summary and detail
□ No typos or grammar errors
□ File naming convention followed
□ Submitted to correct portal/address
□ Confirmation of receipt obtained
Real Examples: RFP Wins Against Larger Competitors
Example 1: $8M IT Services Contract (Defeated Incumbent)
Context: 50-person company bidding against incumbent (500+ employees) for federal agency IT support.
Win strategy: Emphasized local presence (HQ 10 miles from client vs. incumbent's 400-mile distance), proposed higher-experience staff (average 12 years vs. incumbent's 6 years), and ghosted incumbent's high turnover rate by emphasizing "stable, dedicated team with 95% retention."
Key differentiator: Proposed embedded team working on-site daily vs. incumbent's remote support model. Addressed known client frustration with slow response times.
Result: Won with technically superior proposal despite being 8% higher in price. Evaluators cited "better understanding of our needs" and "commitment to partnership."
Example 2: $3M Healthcare Consulting (First-Time Federal Contractor)
Context: Small firm with zero federal experience competing against established federal contractors.
Win strategy: Leveraged deep healthcare subject matter expertise (15 years in hospital operations) against competitors' generalist approach. Positioned lack of federal experience as advantage: "Fresh perspective unconstrained by 'this is how it's always been done.'"
Mitigation: Partnered with experienced federal contractor for administrative support while retaining technical lead.
Result: Won on technical superiority. Evaluators noted "unmatched healthcare expertise" outweighed federal experience concerns.
Key Takeaways
RFP responses succeed when they're compliant, differentiated, and credible. Compliance means addressing every requirement and following all instructions. Differentiation means clear win themes integrated throughout. Credibility means evidence-based claims supported by past performance.
Start with compliance matrix ensuring no requirements are missed. Develop 3-5 win themes that highlight your strengths relative to competitors. Use ghosting to raise factors favoring you without naming competitors.
Executive summary is your most important section—it must be compelling and complete. Technical approach should be clear, feasible, and showcase your methodology. Past performance must demonstrate relevant similar projects with measurable results.
Pricing strategy should align with evaluation method (LPTA vs. best value). Justify costs and show total cost of ownership. Be transparent and realistic.
The proposals that win aren't always from the largest companies with most resources—they're from teams that understand the client's needs, demonstrate they can deliver, and tell a compelling story about why they're the right choice.