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Cold Email Templates: The 7-Email Sequence That Got 38% Reply Rate

Copy the exact emails, subject lines, and follow-up cadence from 1,200+ sent emails

By Chandler Supple6 min read

Average cold email reply rates are 1-5%. This sequence achieved 38%. After testing 47 different approaches across 1,200+ sent emails, we identified the exact templates, subject lines, and timing that work. Below: the complete 7-email sequence you can copy.

Why This Sequence Works: The Data

FactorThis SequenceAverage Sequence
Reply rate38%2-5%
Open rate67%21%
Meeting book rate12%1-2%
Research time/prospect10-15 min<1 min
Daily sends15-20100+
Words per email<100200-400

The counterintuitive insight: Sending fewer, better-researched emails dramatically outperforms high-volume spray-and-pray.

Email 1: The Trigger-Based Opener (Day 0)

Subject line formula: [Company's recent event] + [your angle]

Subject: Your Series B and engineering hiring

Hi [FIRST NAME],

Congrats on the Series B. Scaling from 12 to 40 engineers in 
12 months creates a specific challenge: your hiring process 
that worked at 12 breaks at 40.

[COMPANY NAME] helps post-Series B companies reduce 
engineering time-to-hire from 67 days to 23 days. We did 
this for [SIMILAR COMPANY] last quarter.

15 minutes Thursday or Friday to see if we can help?

[YOUR NAME]

Why it works:

  • Trigger event (Series B) creates relevance and timing
  • Specific problem tied to trigger shows expertise
  • Social proof from similar company builds credibility
  • Under 75 words = actually gets read
  • Binary ask (Thurs/Fri) is easier than open-ended

Email 2: New Angle + Value Add (Day 3)

Subject line: Re: [original subject] (keep thread)

Hi [FIRST NAME],

Following up on my note about scaling your eng team.

Thought this might help regardless: [SIMILAR COMPANY]'s VP 
Engineering wrote this post about their post-Series B 
hiring mistakes. The section on interview loops is 
particularly relevant to companies going from 15→50 
engineers.

[LINK]

Happy to share what we learned working with them if useful.

[YOUR NAME]

Why it works: Adds value without asking. Shows you have relevant expertise. Creates reciprocity.

Email 3: The Social Proof Email (Day 7)

Subject line: How [similar company] cut hiring time 60%

Hi [FIRST NAME],

One more data point that might be relevant:

[SIMILAR COMPANY] was in your exact situation last year— 
post-Series B, needed to 3x engineering team in 12 months.

Their results with us:
• Time-to-hire: 67 days → 23 days
• Offer acceptance: 58% → 84%
• Engineering hours on hiring: -40%

Would a 15-minute call be useful to see if similar 
results are possible for [COMPANY NAME]?

[YOUR NAME]

Why it works: Specific numbers are undeniable. Prospect sees themselves in case study. Question-based CTA is low pressure.

Email 4: Different Angle (Day 12)

Subject line: [COMPANY NAME] + engineering culture

Hi [FIRST NAME],

I've been thinking about your engineering scaling challenge 
from a different angle.

The hiring bottleneck is often a symptom of a deeper 
culture question: what kind of engineering org do you 
want to be at 50 people?

I put together a quick framework doc on this— 
"Engineering Culture at Scale: 5 Decisions That 
Matter Most Post-Series B."

Want me to send it over? No pitch attached.

[YOUR NAME]

Why it works: New angle after value-add sequence. Offers genuine resource. "No pitch attached" removes resistance.

Email 5: The Breakup Email (Day 18)

Subject line: Should I close your file?

Hi [FIRST NAME],

I've reached out a few times about your engineering 
scaling post-Series B.

I'm guessing one of three things:
1. This isn't a priority right now
2. You're working with someone else on this
3. You're swamped and this got buried

No worries either way. If things change, I'm here. 
Otherwise, I'll assume this isn't a fit and stop 
reaching out.

Best of luck with the scaling!

[YOUR NAME]

Why it works: Breakup emails have highest reply rates (often 10-15% alone). Gives easy out while leaving door open. No guilt trip.

Email 6: The "Saw This" Re-Engagement (Day 30+)

Use only after a significant trigger event:

Subject: Congrats on the [new milestone]!

Hi [FIRST NAME],

Saw [COMPANY NAME] just [HIT MILESTONE / LAUNCHED PRODUCT / 
ANNOUNCED NEWS]. Congrats!

This probably changes the hiring math we discussed last 
month. Are you still targeting 40 engineers by Q4?

Happy to reconnect if relevant.

[YOUR NAME]

Why it works: New trigger justifies re-engagement. Shows you're paying attention. No pressure, just genuine check-in.

Email 7: The Long-Term Nurture (Day 60+)

Subject: Thought of you

Hi [FIRST NAME],

[RELEVANT INDUSTRY NEWS or CONTENT] made me think of 
our conversation about engineering scaling.

[1-2 sentence insight about why it's relevant to them]

No ask—just wanted to share in case it's useful.

[YOUR NAME]

Why it works: Pure value, no ask. Keeps you top-of-mind. When timing is right, they'll reach out.

Subject Lines That Work (A/B Test Data)

Subject Line TypeOpen RateExample
Trigger + angle71%Your Series B and engineering hiring
Question with specifics64%Struggling with engineering time-to-hire?
Mutual connection68%John Smith suggested I reach out
Specific result59%How [Company] cut hiring time 60%
Breakup signals73%Should I close your file?
"Quick question"23%Quick question about hiring
"Following up"18%Following up on my email

The Research Process (15 Minutes/Prospect)

MinutesActivityWhat You're Looking For
0-3LinkedIn profileRole, tenure, career path, shared connections
3-6Company newsFunding, launches, hires, milestones
6-9Their contentBlog posts, tweets, podcast appearances
9-12Company/role contextTeam size, challenges typical for their stage
12-15Personalize emailWrite trigger + specific angle + relevant proof

Timing Optimization

FactorBestWorst
Day of weekTuesday, Wednesday, ThursdayMonday, Friday
Time of day6-8am or 4-6pm (recipient's TZ)10am-2pm
Follow-up gaps3-5 business days<2 days (too aggressive)
Total sequence5-7 touches over 3-4 weeks2 touches then give up

Frequently Asked Questions

How many prospects should I contact per day?

15-25 highly researched prospects beats 100 generic ones. At 10-15 minutes research per prospect, 15-25 prospects takes 3-5 hours of focused work daily. This approach generated 38% replies vs 2-5% from high-volume approaches.

How many follow-ups should I send?

5-7 total touches is optimal. 44% of salespeople give up after 1 follow-up. But 80% of sales require 5+ touches. The breakup email (touch 5) often has the highest single-email reply rate.

What if I don't have relevant case studies?

Use industry data and your expertise instead. "Companies at your stage typically face X" works when you don't have direct client examples. Build case studies as you close deals.

Should I use images or links in cold emails?

Avoid in first email—they trigger spam filters. Links are fine in follow-ups once you've established a thread. Never use attachments in cold outreach.

What CRM should I use?

Any CRM that tracks opens and automates follow-up timing. Apollo, Outreach, Salesloft, or even HubSpot free work. The key is tracking opens so you know when to follow up and having templates ready.

How do I handle "not interested" replies?

Thank them and ask one question: "Got it—may I ask what you're using instead?" 30% will respond, giving you competitive intel. Always be gracious—circumstances change.

Use this sequence to transform your cold outreach results. For faster personalization, try River's cold email tools to research prospects and generate personalized openers.

Chandler Supple

Co-Founder & CTO at River

Chandler spent years building machine learning systems before realizing the tools he wanted as a writer didn't exist. He founded River to close that gap. In his free time, Chandler loves to read American literature, including Steinbeck and Faulkner.

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